Tuesday, 22 January 2013

"When Love Speaks" : My entry for the Get Published contest"




  "When Love Speaks" : My entry for the Get Published contest"


Idea Description

Sometimes it takes a second or third or even many more sights to fall in love with each other. With Awani and Sushant this thing proved completely true; from casual friendship to close friends and when it turned into Love, they never knew.

A relationship that started from the beautiful city of Udaipur; reached to new heights in Hyderabad and then Delhi before it comes back to Udaipur.

Awani and Sushant were well-aware of the fact that parents will not give their consent for this relationship. Hence, they took decisions one after another, grabbed and left opportunities; to gain time as much as they can. In this process, they both had to change the directions of their lives and careers. Awani got a job in Hyderabad after her B.Tech and Sushant also managed to get admission in an MBA course in Hyderabad, purpose was to be with each other. However, it was just a beginning of a long struggle, a roller costar ride of events and a crazy romance that grew mature and strong with time. But one day the destiny turned its wheels to a different direction which they never anticipated.

Two people who think that “When Love Speaks” nothing else does matter.


What Makes It Real

This story is inspired by those friends of mine who had a long time relationships, a few of them succeeded in taking it to the final stage that is marriage, where as some others had to get separated due to various issues.



Extract

Sitting on a bench at Fateh Sagar Lake (Udaipur), Awani was looking at the reflection of gleaming lights in the water. She remembered that mesmerizing bike ride with Sushant at 4 am in the morning on the empty roads of Hyderabad, around the Hussain Sagar Lake. She wanted to listen to the silence of city and most of all she wished to view the sunrise at the lakeside.

Sushant was driving fast and she spread her arms as if she wanted to embrace the whole world.

“I want to hold the wheel of time right here. I want to stop this moment right here, forever...” she spoke while gazing at the lofty statue of Buddha in the middle of the lake.

Then hold it, but remember when the sun will rise, your moment will disappear,” Sushant laughed in a careless manner.

The same day when she reached at office, her boss called her to give her a news.

Awani’s somnolence got broken and she saw Sushant sitting beside her.

“Do you remember how much you loved to see the sunrise and sunsets at lakeside?”

“Yes, those were beautiful days”.

Awani’s thoughts again went few days back in time...

“Annu, if I would have been aware of all this  ... this Infosys job of yours, your civil service preparations... then I might have never allowed you to go to Hyderabad or anywhere else”, her Father said.




This is my entry for the HarperCollins–IndiBlogger Get Published contest, which is run with inputs from Yashodhara Lal andHarperCollins India.


16 comments:

Bhavana Lalwani said...
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Yashwant R. B. Mathur said...

touchy story.
I recommended it on Indi blogger.
Best Wishes Mam!

Regards

provoqd said...
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Yashwant R. B. Mathur said...


दिनांक 25/01/2013 को आपकी यह पोस्ट http://nayi-purani-halchal.blogspot.in पर लिंक की जा रही हैं.आपकी प्रतिक्रिया का स्वागत है .
धन्यवाद!

Bhavana Lalwani said...

Hello Jay .. Thanks alot for your kind words n such appreciation .. I am sorry that i have deleted yr comments, the reason is that my blog is not the right place for the promotion of contest entry. so plz dnt post coments including the link of yr entry .. I have already voted for yr entry and truely saying it was really interesting .. smthing wid which today's youth can identify themselves.

Bhavana Lalwani said...

Thank u vry much Yashwant ji .. aapka ye blog "Nai-Purani Hulchul" mere jaise bloggers ke liye bahut helpful hai

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Sri Valli said...

Interesting teaser! All the best Bhavana!

debajyoti said...

but where is the link to your entry :D? i remember, i was searching for it even last time when i visited this page. searched the entire get published entries :D. i really liked your post and wanted to vote for it.

Bhavana Lalwani said...

Thank u very much ... I need yr votes as well.

Bhavana Lalwani said...

ummm ... Hvnt u already voted fr it ...I think u did. B/w thnks a lot fr showing interest.
Abt the post link among all the contest entries thn I myself not able to find it .. (seems I m already out) :P
i evn asked abt my post link on getpublish forum but hvnt got ny reply... God knows wat is going on..

Arti said...

Nice gripping narration and plot, Bhavava! Leaves me wanting for more! All the best :)

Bhavana Lalwani said...

Thank u Arti .. :)

yamini gupta said...

it is jst tremendous bhavna ji! Best of luck! Tc

diya said...

where is complete story

Bhavana Lalwani said...

Still incomplete.. cudnt get time nor was able to make my mind to write the complete story .. however, one day, Awani and Sushant will surely finish this beautiful journey