However, this situation remained no longer; she made herself busy
with floral vines and in search of that rabbit... However, the enthusiasm was
missing.
Then, her eyes fell on that FLOWER…the flower in lake... It
was still there. She wanted that flower …she just wanted to have it... but how...
it was far …ahh, who cares...She was
thinking…
I want this...
She looked here and there, may be something she can find... She started searching.
After a while, she found a long twisted broken branch of a tree…”humm, perhaps, this can help..”
She entered into the water... It was cold.. Moreover, the
bottom of lake was a bit slippery too... She was moving carefully...
slowly-slowly …now half of her body was in the water. The flowers, she was wearing,
as ornaments were now loosing up and getting scattered on water surface. Only
the crown remained on her head, but she removed it too. Suddenly, she felt
something... The cold water…its touch was uncanny... An enchanting atmosphere was
surrounding her senses. She let herself lost in that magical moment of heavenly
sensation. Water was penetrating her skin…it was drenching her soul, her
spirit. She stayed in that position for a while... She even forgot the reason,
(the flower), that brought her here, into the water.
After a while, as a thought struck her mind and she felt a
bit scared, she came out of that magical world. Regaining her consciousness,
she then, looked at that flower... Carefully she stretched the branch that she
carried with her and gently pulled the flower stalk... After a couple of
attempts, she successfully pulled and plucked the flower. Then, she came out of the lake.
Flower was bigger than other normal flowers and its fragrance
was overwhelming her senses.. Or maybe she was still feeling that mystique
aura. She made a loose chignon of her hair and tugged the flower in it. She
went back to the lake … saw herself in the mirror of lake... Flower was looking
extremely pretty or was that her imagination, which was making it pretty? She
did not know.
…and then, once again she saw that rabbit, doing something
near a tree…both were aware of each other’s presence and were exchanging some
glances… girl was smiling and rabbit was twinkling his eyes. Finally, he moved
to a tree-grove, curiosity led her to follow him once again. .She entered into
that grove... and what was there … more three-four rabbits.
She took a quick look of the surrounding and her face got
delighted with a childlike cheerfulness, engulfing her mind, her soul into a
heavenly feeling. She joined those
little fluffy friends or they joined her... cannot say … but one thing was sure
that they were enjoying each other’s company. More couple of hours went like
this... She forgot about the rest of world... she forgot the time and its barriers…
even she fall asleep for a while... She was dreaming. Dreaming about the “other
sides”, about the reflections... and about the rabbits.
A loud voice broke the silence. Somebody is calling.. She woke up.
“What kind of noise is this?” She whispered. She came back
to the lake.
That boy, the same boy, was wandering here and there, looking
all around and calling her name ..
“June, June…are you there?”
She was surprised to see him back. For a minute, she stayed quiet and watched his activities.
“So you are here...” He was happy to see her, he was breathless still, a broad smile
spread on his face. She noticed it and came towards him. She
was still looking at him with a wonder.
“Say something…I thought, you might have gone... But, you
are ..”
“Yes, I was here only.” she said slowly. He noticed that
unsaid happiness and unexpressed joy behind those words.
“How you came back.. I thought you are gone. Your people
were calling you.” She asked
“Yes, some work…but I finished it and came back to see
whether you are still here…” His breath was now getting normal.
She was listening to his words … carefully.
“So, what were you doing all the time? Did not you get
afraid?”
“Afraid of what?”
“This place, all alone...”
He left the sentence incomplete and asked almost in a loud
manner... ”What happened to those flowers?”
First, she laughed…then, she said, “They are gone”
“Gone??? Where?” He was getting confused. Thousands of
thoughts were storming his mind…
She was smiling; her eyes were sparkling with a mystery. Holding
a silence, as she is hiding something, she giggled and repeated, “They are
gone”
He was still in same situation... Wanted to ask, but did not
know how?
“Did you not see this...?” She pointed to the flower in her
hair. Her face was now glowing with a feel of victory. He couldn't get her, but
then, the very next moment, he looked at the lake. (They were not much far from
lake) and again at the flower..
“How did you do that ?” His eyes were widened with a great
surprise.
She smiled, “Just did that. I went into the water and
plucked it with a broken branch”. She said as a little child telling about her
good work at school.
“Are you crazy? “You went into the water?!!!!!”
“Yes...” She said in careless manner.
“You are crazy…completely crazy”. “It could have been risky...
don’t you know that”.
“Relax, there was nothing as such. It was neither risky nor any
troublesome task.”
Her tone remained careless and ignorant to his question. He
listened more words than she spoke and understood more than she actually meant.
His enthusiasm and happiness of seeing her, was now diminishing.
Meanwhile, she was going back to the tree grove...
“Where are you going now?” He was still confused.
“Oh, I...I am... I want to show you something, come... come”
Though, He did not ask any question, yet he followed her with a
heavy heart. Soon they were near that grove.
She seemed disappointed, rabbits or any sign of them was not there.
“Where are those rabbits?”
“What rabbits?”
“Here, I was playing with them all the time when you were
not here.”
Now, he got more disconcerted... ”I never saw any rabbit
here.”
“But, they were here.” ….
“Anyway, come, see this...”
She went to a huge
banyan tree and held a thick vine duo, which was looking as a nature made
swing. She sat on it and slowly-slowly started swinging on it...up and downwards….
“Be cautious, lest you should fall.” He was worried and
upset as well.
She laughed and for that moment, her laughter sounds like a waterfall
…falling from high hills…He was looking her with another surprise... “You are
crazy...”
Soon the swing caught some speed. And, as it was not enough
for her, so she started turning it round in circular motions.
He was, once again astonished. Her
laughter and that loud expression of joy were creating magnetic waves, engulfing everything that was presented on that moment of time on that piece of land ... and
she, she was hardly aware of all that and was enjoying the swinging only…He felt that he was not able to move eyes from her...
or maybe he doesn’t wanted to do that.. Meanwhile, she noticed it..
She noticed his eyes…there were aspirations, expectations,
ambitions and ...and lot more things. And
in her eyes,…he saw a dream, hidden behind the sparkling curtains. He stepped
forward…
“You have not asked my name yet.”
“I know your name.” Another careless reply.
“You know!!!!!!!!! But, I have not told you... then, how…how
you know?? “He was now standing in front of her.
“What…” For a second
she stopped laughing and seemed answer less...
He repeated the question…Her smile came back. Eyes were looking
to an unknown horizon, when she said…
“Your name is Mirage …Your name is Rainbow Phantasm.”
He stopped the swing with a strong grip of hands and looked
to her, but she softly removed his hand and stood up from the swing.
He was speechless, but wanted to say something.
She heard…She turned back…but what is this...
Everything ... around
her, including him, was getting disappear in a vortex. She shouted with fear...
she extended her hand to catch something…but it was late...
“Stoppppppp…” Her breath was fast and she was sweating…
“Soniya, Rani, what happened
...It was just a dream. Relax...” Those were her parents.
Her cell-phone ring tone rang up…” Chhoti si kahani se
baarishon ke paani se..saari vaadi bhar gai…”
The First Part of the Story is Here
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5 comments:
My sincere thanks to Shekhar Chandra for his time, patience , cooperation and suggestions he gave to improve the second part as well.
>> "her eyes were sparkling with a mystery." That's called the beauty of writing.
>> "She said as a little child telling about her good work at school." This is pretty good.
>> "her laughter sounds like a waterfall …falling from high hills…" beautiful simile...
>> "semi-circle and in circular motions" once again scientific words.
Beautiful... very beautiful story, the the part 1 is more attractive.Nice work, congrats...
...and one thing that u should do is study Synthesis in grammar :)
Thank you. It was nice reading it.
okkkkkkkkkkkk...........so in the second part it turned out to be a dream..........wonderful...the reflections of reality in fantasy....hindi me ek baar likhna.........i believe it will make a very good story...........
nice selection of words.good work.
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