tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1184502663170430111.post271239358572420566..comments2023-11-22T14:10:36.573+05:30Comments on Life with Pen and Papers: एक खुला दरवाजाBhavana Lalwanihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10803470573955340519noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1184502663170430111.post-87625719372816714332013-09-17T22:45:29.081+05:302013-09-17T22:45:29.081+05:30१.
खटखटा तो दूँ,
दरवाज़ा
तेरा, खुदा
या खुद क...१. <br /><br />खटखटा तो दूँ, <br />दरवाज़ा <br />तेरा, खुदा <br />या खुद का। <br />बंद हैं, दरवाज़े <br />हम तीनो के। <br /><br />२. <br /><br />एक ही, सांकल <br />छूटना है <br />हमें। <br />बस मौत आर पार है। <br /><br />३. <br /><br />तहखानो के <br />खुले दरवाज़े,<br />तमाम ज़िन्न कैद जिनमें। <br />बंद कर रखा है,<br />तहखानों को,<br />खुद के अन्दर। <br /><br />RAJANIKANT MISHRAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05620515043834445894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1184502663170430111.post-34618310889487946532013-09-17T22:32:11.184+05:302013-09-17T22:32:11.184+05:30kam se kam koi jawaab toh milega .. us jawaab ki a...kam se kam koi jawaab toh milega .. us jawaab ki aas mein hi sahi .. ek baar darwaja khulwaa k toh dekho .. pata toh chale ki Khuda ke ghar mein koun koun rahta hai Bhavana Lalwanihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10803470573955340519noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1184502663170430111.post-8019459900331864112013-09-17T22:16:11.247+05:302013-09-17T22:16:11.247+05:30khud ka darwazaa hi nhi khatkhatana chate hum... k...khud ka darwazaa hi nhi khatkhatana chate hum... kab kaun sa jinn nikal aaye...RAJANIKANT MISHRAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05620515043834445894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1184502663170430111.post-7260236510595338992012-06-07T23:28:53.252+05:302012-06-07T23:28:53.252+05:30hey good one ..and crispyhey good one ..and crispyAnikethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04812719273584086817noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1184502663170430111.post-69300946060736462252012-03-08T12:22:54.013+05:302012-03-08T12:22:54.013+05:30mujhe samajh nahi aaya, ye likha kya hai aapne?mujhe samajh nahi aaya, ye likha kya hai aapne?मनीषhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11216751416952556067noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1184502663170430111.post-50154056765197045252012-03-02T09:59:01.771+05:302012-03-02T09:59:01.771+05:30philosopher bhavnaji bahut badhiya.... your writin...philosopher bhavnaji bahut badhiya.... your writing is getting matured one... u r capable to write whole book...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01997809448642302565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1184502663170430111.post-31690754751515029562012-02-26T18:52:34.434+05:302012-02-26T18:52:34.434+05:30good...good...Namisha Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01880703132009619136noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1184502663170430111.post-22309335625657656372012-02-26T10:31:12.755+05:302012-02-26T10:31:12.755+05:30वाह ,कमाल का दर्शन है भावना जी । बहुत खूब । अच्छी ...वाह ,कमाल का दर्शन है भावना जी । बहुत खूब । अच्छी पोस्टअजय कुमार झाhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16451273945870935357noreply@blogger.com